I recently had the chance to play this game, and I wanted to share my thoughts in a more detailed manner. There were aspects that I genuinely enjoyed, such as the captivating art style and the intriguing initial storyline. However, I do have some constructive feedback to offer.
To start with the positives, the game's art style is truly commendable, and the initial storyline piqued my interest. Unfortunately, I found that the story's quality seemed to decline as it progressed. One issue I encountered was a lack of balance; the romance plotline seemed to take up more time than the main plot, which left me somewhat confused about the overall direction of the narrative.
Moreover, as the storyline continued, it became increasingly convoluted, especially during the dream sequence and the cliffhanger ending. This left me feeling somewhat unsatisfied, as it seemed like a somewhat rushed way to conclude the story.
Another area of improvement could be the dialogue. The characters, who are meant to be college students, often came across as somewhat immature and teenage-like. Crafting more realistic and age-appropriate dialogue could greatly enhance the overall immersion and believability of the game.
To summarize, I believe this game has tremendous potential, and I offer this feedback with the intention of helping it improve further. Please don't take my comments as criticism, but rather as constructive suggestions. I genuinely enjoyed the game and hope that the developer can refine it in future updates. I've been mulling over these thoughts for a while, and I'm excited to see how this game evolves.